Wednesday, February 19, 2014

Blue Collar Brilliance and Nickel and Dimbed


 

In the essay Nickel and Dimed, Ehrenriech seems to have a very negative attitude toward her new job and the work she actually does for the Maid’s service.  I don’t think she necessarily argued anything what so ever, but more or less just complained the whole time about how awful her new job is.  She goes into detail about how poorly paid for the hard, fast paced work that the maid’s do, which makes her argument somewhat effective.  But the whole essay is geared so negatively that it seems to draw away from the low waged, high work job, to a more gloomy essay revolving around how sad or depressing her along with the other’s lives are.  I think she should have explained her job and position, and then explained more in depth of the hard work with low pay she is receiving and how unfair it is.

In the essay of Blue Collar Brilliance, Rose has a more positive attitude toward how his mother worked her waitress job.  While Rose explains how his mother had a handful of stressful task, dealing with the cook to addressing the customers and catering to their every need, she is portrayed as a very positive upbeat person.  This essay seems to be more effective to me, because of the tone the author uses, along with how he describes the hard blue collar work without sounding sad and depressed like the Nickel and Dimed essay seemed to do.

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